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Spaiku.

A few from S4.
A/N: "Patches" is my nickname for Adam. (That and "Patch Adams.") I guess I'm just not impressed enough with his stature in the Buffy pantheon of villains (or his makeup) to refrain from mocking him.
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I.
Team up with Patches,
pit Scooby against Slayer. . .
good-bye, Mr. Chip.


II.
Spins them one by one,
a snarky Yoko with fangs.
It’s foolproof, really.


III.
Balls! It’s as he feared--
human-demon hybrids? Pfff.
No sense of whimsy.

Comments

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slaymesoftly
Mar. 15th, 2008 07:34 pm (UTC)
Okay. You're allowed to skip any more boring meetings. :)
mere_ubu
Mar. 15th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
\0/ Woot!

Thanks for reading. :D
moscow_watcher
Mar. 15th, 2008 08:09 pm (UTC)
Hee! Spot-on!

good-bye, Mr. Chip

:)))))))
mere_ubu
Mar. 15th, 2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
Aw, thank you. I'm happy to make you "hee!" :D
diachrony
Mar. 15th, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
Hee!

Adam is very mockable. "Patches" is a good nickname for him.
mere_ubu
Mar. 15th, 2008 10:58 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I just never quite buy him as a convincing Big Bad. For one thing, he's not funny! Isn't that a prerequisite for Buffy villains? :P

philips
Mar. 18th, 2008 11:34 pm (UTC)
Excellent job. Always impressive how you narrow it down to just the pitch perfect words. Spins-Yoko-Balls-Patches-whimsy-Mr.chip, love it all.
mere_ubu
Mar. 19th, 2008 01:12 am (UTC)
Thanks, dear philips. You just made my evening. :)

(P.S. I would have completely forgotten that "balls" was an option if I hadn't already given it a test run in the sherbet spaiku. Score one more for sherbet!)
philips
Mar. 19th, 2008 01:23 am (UTC)
Sherbet. Where writers go for their inspirational sugar high. Try some today!

*Required disclaimer: This has been a paid announcement from the Sherbet Industry*

Lord, I'm whackalicious tonight.
mere_ubu
Mar. 19th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
*lol* Yer not snorting the sherbet, are you?!
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